Paddle Underneath

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*Daily Post*

*Animal, Concrete Poetry, Enjambment*




4 thoughts on “Paddle Underneath

  1. I found that I had to read this poem quietly, because it refuses to be loud. It’s a lovely tribute to the duck, and a beautiful love story. The closing sentence is a triumph, and the image is perfect.
    Thank you for sharing this.

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  2. You did an excellent job with this one! Great imagery. I can vividly see this bird on the water then diving down under, tail in the air. I love the verse about the way it’s paddling its feet 🙂


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