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  Like rain before snow-

          fall, you are captivating.

          Pre – dangerous freeze

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*Daily Post – Poetry*

*Water, simile, haiku*

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4 thoughts on “

  1. I liked the image you evoked here, but my favorite part might just be the enjambment between the first and second lines, when the word snowfall “falls” from one line to the next. I love these playful-yet-meaningful touches.

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